I like that every second is a blush rushing suspense on what’s going to happen to Steve and Beau. Around every corner Steve has a problem he needs to face whether it’s helping Beau or trying to stay alive himself. It keeps me on my toes and makes me want to read more. Now that the mom and sister are in the picture, there is more drama and excitement. One of the things I don’t like is how Donavan randomly was introduced in the 18th chapter with no description on history about who he is. There are too many random characters coming and going. Nothing more has been said about Leroy so we don’t know how/what he is doing.